| 2016-01-30 10:02:07 |
A New Day, The Other Me chapter 2
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Well at least he is starting to grow some balls now, he might even become the man that he was in the original series. |
| 2016-01-30 21:49:57 |
my wife caught me closely looking at a sheep's pussy
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NOT WORTH THE EFFORT OF TRYING TO READ IT, RUBBISH, RUBBISH, RUBBISH |
| 2016-01-31 04:21:28 |
A Man and His Pets (complete)
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Sorry to have to write this, but gave up in chapter 12, just got too sick for me to really enjoy it. |
| 2016-01-31 21:07:57 |
choice of a step mother. Intervention - part-2
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very confusing and poorly written, seems to me that you are rushing to a deadline and not concentrating on what you are writing about, settle down, take it easy, think about what you are doing, then think again.. |
| 2016-01-31 21:41:23 |
I Had Always Wanted ..... Part 2
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Come on B/H, it has been 9 months since p2 was posted, please get p3 up and running, very disappointed that it is so long between chapters. |