| 2015-12-23 21:03:25 |
Asian Dream 1 (revised)
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this is the first time that I have read your work. and it will be the LAST TIME AS WELL. |
| 2015-12-29 22:49:57 |
Powers to Control from an Artifact
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Your intro is completely wrong, the story is NOT worth reading, basically, it is just a ripoff of similar but much better stories. |
| 2015-12-29 22:31:08 |
Whoa! The Adventure Continues IV
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really? just getting repetitious now, same as the last chapter, only the name changes. I really thought that you were better than this.. |
| 2016-01-10 01:02:06 |
Finding Krissy - The Great Escape - Chapter 1
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this story, whilst interesting, is so damned obvious about what is going to happen, that I could write it myself. ... |
| 2016-01-09 00:01:18 |
SOVEREIGNTY 2
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I tried to read it again, but most of the story seems to be missing, hell of a lot of chapters missing, how about reposting the entire story? |