| 2015-12-07 06:23:28 |
Incest Wife Complete_(0)
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just the same as your other story, just the names and places change for the sex. |
| 2015-11-13 20:55:11 |
The Stone Part 2
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sorry mate, but, this is definitely not up to your normal standard, I found it to be absolutely bloody boring. to say the least.. |
| 2015-11-09 20:05:57 |
SOVEREIGNTY 2
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This story needs to be deleted and redone, as it is now? almost unreadable, very hard to get into and understand, apart from that, an interesting plot that could be very enjoyable... |
| 2015-11-09 20:43:01 |
Christmas Angel_(2)
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Sorry to write this pars, but, this is just a mish mash of ideas, does not make any sense to me, most definitely, NOT, REPEAT, NOT, up to your normal high standards.. |
| 2015-12-06 18:38:35 |
The Stranger_(0)
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what a bloody turn around, from saviour to rapist, just not right. this could have been a good story.. |