| 2016-01-08 23:01:07 |
Love can be in plain sight 2
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all the lovey dovey crap is spoiling this story, becoming way too sappy to be believable. actually reads as if a lovelorn teen girl wrote it. |
| 2016-01-08 22:53:27 |
Love can be in plain sight
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THERE are better stories than this around but quite reasonable. |
| 2016-01-04 22:27:08 |
Femboi's Bimbo Transformation
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more like reading a very bad play script than a story, how it rates at 100% I do not know. |
| 2016-01-04 22:28:45 |
Daddy's Femboi
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another load of garbage to place in the rubbish bin |
| 2016-01-05 20:04:05 |
My Fleet Experience Ch.2
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good story except that I read it quite some time ago, not sure when, so what is it?? copy, rewrite or stolen? what ever, still good... |