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Comments from animal99
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2013-10-03 00:13:44 | divorced daddy | This story had me hard but it could have been a really HOT story if you didn't have sO many mistakes. Perhaps you should have proof-read it a few times before publishing. |
| 2013-10-03 01:14:30 | Family Conspiracy- Chapter 5: Marci's Surprise | Wow.... This was really HOT! |
| 2013-10-06 01:07:12 | Adventures with Powers_(0) | I agree with CountryCadillac... You do write very well and clearly, too. There are many young writers who could stand to learn a few things about writing and proofreading their work, from your example :) And of course, This was a good story... Have to find the next chapter :) |
| 2013-10-06 01:09:28 | Adventures with Powers 2 | Sorry to ask but isn't this a reposting of "powers-1" ? |
| 2013-10-06 01:26:51 | Robbie and Uncle Donnie Find Each Other | Very good... Next story? |