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Comments from animal99
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2013-10-09 14:26:32 | Happy Mothers Day! - Bobby's Bitch | Still not much alone time between mom and son... I'd like to see more of that. |
| 2013-10-09 17:15:36 | Giving Blowjobs To My Friend | Will you ever write a sequel to this? |
| 2013-10-10 15:02:20 | My brother is my protector | I liked your story but the switching back and forth kind of throws off the flow of a good story. How you take it from a THIRD persons perspective (a narrative), and tell us what they're each thinking without switching to having EACH character tell us. When you start to have the characters tell us what they're feeling, it reads more like they're EACH giving us a speech. My point is that your story could have been REALLY HOT, if you had kept it as a flowing, well-thought out story. AS it is, I would rate it a 5 out of 10... Good, but not Great. |
| 2013-10-14 00:49:58 | How to get an easy girl. | Good story.... Next story, Please :) |
| 2013-10-14 01:39:45 | Trained Step Sister pt.1 | That was a good story... I can't wait to read more chapters :) |