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Comments from animal99
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2013-10-28 14:37:52 | Brothers new discovery | BabyCandy - This was a very good story for your first time! There were a few words that were not correct because it seems as if you were in a hurry or didn't proof-read it slowly enough to see the errors ("He loved sports and was always activity.") Despite those mistakes, I liked your story idea's and especially your ability to tell a story from beginning to end. I look forward to seeing more of your stories - If you come up with sequels to this story, that would be nice, too. I enjoy reading stories of brother and sisters, and especially like how you had your characters show their concern for each other... that made it more HOT for me :) |
| 2013-11-07 22:32:43 | Test Dummy | I am really enjoying where you went with this... Turmoil from incest that reads as if really happened! I This makes your story far more intriguing (in a melodramatic way) than 95% of the stories I've read on here... Keep going with this plot, and I am curious what else you'll come up with in your stories :) |
| 2013-11-28 17:57:01 | My Step Daughter_(1) | I liked your idea - catching bro and sis having sex. It's too bad it ended there. I was looking forward to more chapters in which he saw them go further... and eventually doing the same thing to her, as she slept. :) |
| 2013-11-30 15:04:15 | In the Room with Megan | I had to log in to write this: I really enjoyed your story. There were a few things wrong with the grammar/ writing... but I really enjoyed your story, and your ideas. I am looking forward to seeing more from you so I hope you write more. The only bad thing I found that should be addressed is that you should proof-read it a few times before publishing it. You've got the story-telling part down (done right) but your mistakes in the sentences kinda threw things off for me. I'm afraid that is why your approval score is lower than I expected. Good story.. now write a sequel :) |
| 2013-11-30 17:23:29 | Beths Incestation | I didn't find this funny at all... Was this supposed to be a joke? It wasn't the incest talk that made it NOT funny... I can take THAT... it just wasn't funny, at all... Must have been something to do with the writing - And I can only guess that it was funny when you heard it but NOT when you wrote it down! |