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Comments from animal99
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2015-10-20 15:27:41 | Helping Big Brother | i enjoyed this story a long time ago... i enjoyed reading it again today. For those of you who have problems with sibling sex, you shouldn't watch GAME of THRONES about a royal family who started out as children of the Two Royal siblings who have had sex since the onset of her puberty... and continued to the present. Unlike GoT, this story is a lot more pleasant! |
| 2016-01-27 07:11:20 | Taking Care of Sydney: Chapter 2: Day 1 | I found problemms too, but I still enjoyed your story. At times it made me laugh at the incredulity but I look forward to reading the next chapter! |
| 2016-04-16 01:40:32 | Hypnotizing Whitney_(1) | Excellent Story, as I have said to you many times before. Sure, there were a few "mistakes" but I loved the story - The hypnotic suggestions were not forcing anyone to act in a certain way that would get them used or abused.... Sis took the action on her own. I like that no one can cry "ABUSE" or "VICTIM". Very Hot story, and I am not easily turned on by a story. THANK YOU. :) |
| 2016-04-07 18:29:32 | I Think I Can Take It | very good :) |
| 2016-04-27 21:23:57 | Matt: The Hypnotist_(3) | I think this was an excellent result for a first timer.... I'm not saying it's PERFECt but it was damn good - The story was fluid and was told well. The characters were good... not your usual 2-dimensional characters (Ditzy girl, Macho guy with a big dick who knows how to use it) Your choice to write it offline using an editor was what I proposed to many writers, first time and older, more experienced writers. Many of the stories posted are full of grammar and spelling errors - which could have been avoided if they had only used a program like MS WORD, offline, that has a built -in spell checker and Grammar correcting tools. So, in short - THANK YOU for proving my point. I commend you for showing other NEW writers how it should be done! PLEASE, Continue your writing... give us a few more chapters with these characters... and I look forward to seeing more of your stories. |