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Comments from animal99
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2016-09-22 19:07:18 | Mom's Motivational Techniques | I just re-read this story and it was STILL really, Really good. It certainly stirs my imagination! I first read your story in 2014 and I still enjoying it very much in 2016! :) Wish there were other chapters in this same story :) |
| 2017-06-06 18:03:47 | LITTLE SISTER HELPS | JAmes, I liked your story but I also see the point of criticism. There were moments where you made lengthy explanations that could or should have been more brief. I only say this because it detracted from the flow of the story. " told her that I would love to, but for the first time it can be a bit uncomfortable without her experience and knowledge of what to do." - explaining the pain and discomfort made the sentence too long, and robs the story of any erotic mood you could have built up to the point. All in all, I enjoyed the story.... but at times it felt as if I was reading a sex story written by my high school English teacher who couldn't stop talking. |
| 2017-06-06 17:38:22 | DOORS | Good..but the story..well, it seems confused at times. Tell it from one person's perspective and try not to explain too much - it detracts from the erotic parts and stifles the mood you were trying (?) to build up. |
| 2017-06-06 17:30:09 | DOORS 2 | Cool story but the switching of pronouns and perspectives in your writing got confusing at times. The high brow attitude of the writing didn't help, either. Still, I liked it- the story had potential for being quite erotic. Too bad the sex was rushed in it, almost as if you were trying to hide the fact that a carnal experience took place. |
| 2017-06-06 17:21:29 | How I meet Montana Jim | Haha... Even I liked this story, imagining it was my dick ripping that ass to shreds! |