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Comments from animal99
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-29 22:05:52 | Sharing My Room With Sis 10: Abby's Fear | WOW... I loved this series of stories. I have saved it offline because I want to be able to enjoy it for years to come. I do hope you will write more - I too would like to see this relation and stories go further. Now that she's given herself entire to her brother, I'd like to see where their love takes them as it develops into something deeper, as time goes on. Do they go thru life as Bro-Sis FIRST or LOVERS, first and foremost? I can hardly wait for you to write these stories! |
| 2020-01-29 22:07:29 | Sharing My Room With Sis 10: Abby's Fear | BTW- This couple' story was the most loving young incest couple I've read about in a long time. Thank you for making feel SO real. |
| 2020-02-05 17:05:14 | Sister's drunken party | I wanted to love this story but the writing just wasn't as good as your other story, "Mistaken when drunk". I think it was the grammar mistakes that just made me wake up from this fantasy story. Was this a first draft? It kind of felt like it. "Mistaken when drunk" was more polished and was more fun to read, so i think the writing there was better. Perhaps if you re-wrote it and re-posted it as "editted", I may find myself loving it more. Sorry to sound so harsh but your "Mistaken when drunk" set a high bar. |
| 2020-02-05 17:26:57 | Married to my sister | I enjoyed this one, even with the "errors". |
| 2020-11-22 07:32:53 | Girlfriend's little sister | If this is supposed to be a fantasy then you have more of the story to tell. Write a second chapter where these two meet years later, when she is older or of age to consent to sex. Have things pick up where they left off before the breakup. You set up a nice seduction so follow thru with it. |