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Comments from throatHER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2019-07-13 22:44:23 | A Trip to the Drive Through, My Boyfriend Will Never Forget | This reminds me of a scene from What Would Steven Do Chp 2. Uncanny resemblance. Lol |
| 2019-07-16 03:08:41 | the bosses daughter_(2) | Please, please, please work on your sentence structure. Absolutely horrible to read. Good premise of story but is made bad by your use of grammar. Use quotations and commas when appropriate. Yes she said then ok I said then he said WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS we said. Won't give it a negative but NOT giving it a positive. Work on it and repost it. |
| 2019-07-17 22:06:55 | True Story: Me and my friends 18 year old GF | Very good tale. Hopefully there is more to come. |
| 2019-07-18 23:33:48 | Emma at the Beach | Nice story with very good pacing. Well done! |
| 2019-07-20 10:54:37 | Fun at the Zoo | Lol.... This is not a very good story. I understand the fascination with incest stories for their taboo nature but this is not well written. This feela rushed and not well thought out. If you want to write a good story do your homework first. Look at other writers and take notes on the construction of a story. I suggest you lool at an author like str8tohell or Katie Warner to get better at writing. You critique others but re-read this and critique yourself. A sex story is more than put the dick in the pussy or ass. Develop your work and get better. |