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Comments from throatHER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2019-09-27 20:46:09 | Being Safe | Written very well with good pacing throughout. Some grammatical errors regarding where to put punctuations but regardless a fine story. Bravo! |
| 2019-10-02 13:07:17 | Used in class | A fresh new story. Very erotic. Well done. Bravo! |
| 2019-10-17 20:21:28 | Unsatisfied Wife by Jay_p | This has the makings of a good story but in reading, it felt very rudimentary to me. Very robotic. I would advise you to read other top authors in how they use quotations, punctuations and word play to make their stories flow. This story would benefit from that immensely. Keep working on your craft. Won't give a negative, but can't give a positive either. Keep writing and I look for improvement in the following chapters |
| 2019-10-23 21:16:40 | Anklet Adventure | Well done. Good writing and I'm looking forward to the next installment. |
| 2019-10-26 00:47:31 | What a Difference a Summer Makes- Part 4a | Sorry guys, but there is no timetable for next installment. Busy with work and school. |