| 2020-01-28 03:47:01 |
The Coach's Wife - Chapter 01
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An excellent erotic tale with believability. Very enjoyable read. |
| 2020-02-20 12:53:47 |
Sarah chp.1_(4)
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A refreshingly well crafted story with a high level of believability. Well done. |
| 2020-02-23 18:29:59 |
Sarah chp. 2
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Another well done chapter. My only critique would be your use of ministrations. It is a very good term to use, but be careful to not use it repeatedly. Change it up a few times top make the story flow better. Otherwise, keep up the good work. Looking forward to future chapters. |
| 2020-03-27 18:43:02 |
The Girl in the Yellow Swimsuit
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A very well written and refreshing erotic tale. Bravo! |
| 2020-04-08 22:40:28 |
Best vacation ride you could have
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Nice short story. Hope to read more. |