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Comments from throatHER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2019-07-20 17:04:50 | What a Difference a Summer Makes- Part 4a | Interesting take and accurate. That's why it's a coming of age story. Hence the phrase young, dumb and full of cum! Of course it's been rushed! He's 17 and this is his first time dealing with this type of situation. But I do like the feedback. I do check my stuff everyday and notice a trendin the voting system. Fortunately, I don't take it to heart about the massive down voting that seems to occur every few days. Lol The trolls are Everywhere! |
| 2019-07-20 17:50:05 | What a Difference a Summer Makes- Part 4a | Thanks Soggy Biscuit, But you do raise valid points which will be addressed in Part B but I haven't had time to write it down. It's all in my head but do to life situations I've been slow producing it for you guys to read |
| 2019-07-24 16:06:22 | Alyssa wanted her car detailed, and was reluctantly gangbanged by 3 bbc | So, typical white girl story being molested by black muscular guy who are 'ghetto' Lol. Must be wriiten by a white person. As for the writing itself, very bland and uninteresting. Even if this is a topic you like to write about read others in this genre to learn more about pacing, structure and character development. |
| 2019-07-29 03:40:52 | I Can't Believe I Cheated | Thank you for reading my story T. Now you know me a little bit better. Saturday is going to be so much more interesting now. |
| 2019-07-31 08:18:35 | Tomboy | Overall, I think it's a good tale. But I may be in the minority to say it's not your greatest work. Your story as usual has good character development and not purely sex driven which I enjoy. Thanks for another good offering. |