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Comments from throatHER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2019-06-04 05:13:59 | What a Difference a Summer Makes- Part 3_(1) | 15,029 words |
| 2019-06-09 20:38:08 | What a Difference a Summer Makes- Part 4a | Thank you for the comments. I very much appreciate it. Hopefully, I should be done with Part 4b by weeks end. Won't be quite as long as 4a, but should be just as entertaining. |
| 2019-06-17 05:55:32 | My Story - The High School Years (Chapter 1) | Needs some work on the pacing. You're going through like the Millenium Falcon flies in space, at the speed of light. Slow down and character build. You have a good skeleton of a story that is as old as time. Overall, a good story though. |
| 2019-06-17 06:11:13 | My Story - The High School Years (Chapter 2) | You have shown some improvement over the first chapter. My suggestion is to break up some of your paragraphs to allow it to be a better read. Keep improving! |
| 2019-06-19 09:34:20 | What a Photo Reveals | Outstanding piece of work! Very, very well written. I hope there is more to this tale. Bravo! |