| 2020-05-24 03:54:13 |
The Things We Do at Home - part 5 and final
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I can't rate this chapter as a negative because it is still well written but I may be in the minority in saying it was kind of boring compared to the previous four installments. I like long form stories but this just seemed long and drawn out. |
| 2020-05-24 03:54:17 |
The Things We Do at Home - part 5 and final
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I can't rate this chapter as a negative because it is still well written but I may be in the minority in saying it was kind of boring compared to the previous four installments. I like long form stories but this just seemed long and drawn out. |
| 2020-05-25 10:41:26 |
What a Difference a Summer Makes- Part 4a
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Quick update, part 4B will be completed this week! |
| 2020-05-26 14:04:59 |
The Photograph
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Very well written with great pacing to it. You delved into a taboo subject with a belieavable story with equally believable characters. Bravo! |
| 2020-05-29 14:30:14 |
Naked Day - part 2
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You're a good short story writer. |