| 2015-12-30 05:43:59 |
A Saturday of Cheerleader Pleasure Ch. 04
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Well, the narrator does have a lot of talents. Including being able to tie a tie while being blindfolded. An impressive talent to go along with all of his sexual talents. |
| 2015-12-30 22:50:42 |
A Saturday of Cheerleader Pleasure
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I wouldn't say Becca is shallow, but being the writer, that's just my opinion and personal view of the character. She is definitely vocal about her sexual interests and desires as well as her attraction to the narrator. Nevertheless, thank you for the feedback. Glad you enjoyed the story, and I hope you read all the other chapters in this series and any other stories that I have posted onto this site. |
| 2015-12-31 20:41:31 |
A Brother to Cheer For
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Thank you for the feedback. Nice pun too. And yes, I am certainly considering adding another chapter and making this into a series. If the response continues to be positive, I will more than likely continue this story. |
| 2015-12-31 20:48:28 |
A Saturday of Cheerleader Pleasure Ch. 04
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Thank you for the strongly positive feedback. It's great to hear that you enjoyed my story. Your fantasies sound pretty interesting and arousing, and I'm glad to hear that I was able to successfully describe and tell a story involving group sex. I'm not certain if I will add another chapter to this series, but I will definitely continue to write more erotic stories that will hopefully continue to entertain and arouse readers. |
| 2016-01-02 22:58:58 |
A Brother to Cheer For
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These days, a lot of people are so tuned into technology and social media that they're oblivious to everything around them, even if it involves their own children. I will admit that you make a good point about the narrator's hymen though. This is the first time that I have written and posted an incest genre story, and it definitely had its challenges, especially since it involved a virgin narrator. Hopefully, I can improve the quality of my writing and make the right changes if/when I make this into a series and when I'm writing other erotic tales. Thanks for the feedback. Always appreciated. |