| 2016-01-03 17:50:17 |
A Saturday of Cheerleader Pleasure Ch. 04
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Thank you for the positive feedback. I appreciate it. This really has been my favorite series to write, and I am definitely considering adding another chapter and continuing the series. |
| 2016-01-03 17:53:05 |
A Brother to Cheer For
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Thank you for the feedback. I appreciate it. And don't worry. I plan to keep writing these stories for readers' entertainment and arousal. Any feedback I receive will definitely help improve the quality of my writing and make the stories even more memorable for myself and my readers. |
| 2016-01-03 17:55:02 |
A Brother to Cheer For
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As I mentioned on an earlier comment in this thread, a lot of people these days are so tuned into technology and social media that they're oblivious to everything that is around them, even if their children are involved. But yes, I would say the dad does have some trouble hearing. Perhaps I can elaborate on that further in another chapter? Thanks for the feedback. Always appreciated. |
| 2016-01-04 20:52:26 |
A Brother to Cheer For
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Thank you for the feedback. Yeah, as I mentioned earlier in this thread, it's tough to write stories and sex scenes with at least one virgin character. Trying to find that balance where a character has some idea of what pleasure via intercourse is like and where they discover what pleasure via intercourse is is somewhat difficult. I do have to go back to this story at some point and read it to fully understand those remarks, but it definitely sounds like I have some work to do in that area of the story. Again, thanks for the feedback. Always appreciated. |
| 2016-01-08 01:27:06 |
A Cop, A Cutie, and A Hot Pink Ticket
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What do you mean by his care can? |