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Comments from pyroclast
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2020-09-15 13:14:00 | The Nerd-Part 2 | Hello Senor Longo; I have read many of your stories and enjoyed them. One thing that bugs me, the penis entering the uterus (womb) through the cervix. It just ain't possible man! the opening is too small for retrograde opening. Sure, the medicos can do it with dilation, but under anaesthetic, it is just too painful to do cold. Just ask any woman that has had n IUD inserted. |
| 2020-09-16 12:21:13 | he was my own son | And it would be nice if the female, Martha, was termed a widow, not the male widower. |
| 2020-09-22 11:15:30 | Andromeda1 | Interesting story; but so hard to read. Try to keep dialogue in separate paragraphs, not all run together. Keep writing, you have talent. |
| 2020-10-02 05:24:06 | JAKOB AND JESSIE--PART 3 | Like some others, I find myself skipping the sex sections also; there just seems far too much space/time given to sex and rutting; people just don't live like that, senorlomgo; please tone the sex down to reasonable levels. |
| 2020-10-02 05:34:58 | Jakob and Jessie, Part 4 | Yep, still far too much space given to describing sex. |