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Comments from James Dylan Dean
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2017-03-19 11:10:27 | MASTERS OF SEDUCTION | I feel that a lot of my stories on this site get a fair rating. This one, however, I feel is rated awfully low and has a very week leadership. I guess I missed the mark in getting across that this is a joke on R & D types who seem to overthink a lot of things. He wants to get into a desirable fellow worker's panties to have fun, She wants him to succeed for a different reason. While she also makes substantial preparations for the denouement, his research and applications go to comic heights. It does, however, list some very real scene setters. I love it that they both get what they are looking for, with a lot more effort than what was really needed. |
| 2017-03-18 07:37:44 | Dakota pt.2 | Yes, you could use a proof reader. Then so could I on my stories. I like how you took a real life situation and expanded on it. I do that too. Good effort, keep writing. You could continue on this story, too. |
| 2017-03-18 03:11:56 | OLE' HOSS GOES TO TOWN 2 | Not to worry, Gina. I have thought of this for several years. Nothing holding me here. And I have enough sense left in this head to not be a nuisance to you. |
| 2017-03-18 07:20:23 | Dakota_(1) | Mr, A.D., you will notice that under the Genres it lists Non-Erotic. So, there is nothing wrong with posting a story here with little or no sex. Actually this story was very sexy as it describes young ones first search and realization of the sexual part of life. I loved the phrase: meek servant to the princess. It perfectly describes young girl treatment of young boys, and young boy's reactions to it. Doesn't change until puberty, which greatly changes the balances between them. This is a very pleasing account of the interactions of grade schoolers. Nicely done. |
| 2017-03-18 01:11:51 | OLE' HOSS GOES TO TOWN 2 | Found on Google a 1200 Sq. Ft. condo in Orono for 113500. |