| 2017-03-08 18:30:03 |
Mom plays Nurse
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Cool 'slice-of-life' story. Sometimes in life a person just has to do what he/she has to do despite all that we are taught not t o do. |
| 2017-03-08 17:46:40 |
Avenging Angel chapter 1
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Boy, and I thought that some of my stuff is dark. Legacy Posting 13. I oppose the kind of retribution proposed here. When a person lowers their actions in retaliation, they become a monster also. Valid medical treatment and then legal handling of this is more civilized. And I don't buy into a mental conditions being an excuse, either. My sympathies to anyone who has suffered as the girl did here. My own mother was raped when she was twelve. Was very functional in life, but never escaped the black cloud of that. If a guy actually thinks that castration would help him, he can always make that choice at the hands of medical personel. |
| 2017-03-08 17:37:20 |
OLE' HOSS GOES TO TOWN
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You know, actually I didn't have either Bonanza or Gun Smoke in mind. I saw a very brief porno on a saloon gal and decided to run with the idea. And I have heard the use of the term HOSS used generically several times in westerns as referring to an older guy, perhaps big in stature. My main worry was that some would mistake the term Ole as being the Scandinavian Ole instead of old west lingo for old. Chances you take whne trying to be cute in your writing. hehehehe |
| 2017-03-08 12:12:33 |
CLAIMING ISA
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You are another victim of the assimilation word processing of this site. If you return the story to editing and then double space between your paragraphs, the whole story will be much more readable. I learned to do this when I first came onto the site from other's suggestions. They will restore your story to the active state in due time and you won't lose you rating or reader count. |
| 2017-03-08 12:16:39 |
OLE' HOSS GOES TO TOWN
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I would enjoy pursuing that subject if we ever are able to get into a private discussion mode. And this is the first of a six story arc. I got a lot of negative votes at first, perhaps they didn't get that it is a tongue in cheek rendition of the Old West. |