| 2019-05-12 11:12:26 |
Betting the wives.
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I loved the poker game and subsequent sexual play at Ron's, although hoped for a little spanking. A day for Amy seemed unrealistic, 2 hours or until midnight. Going to the club seemed OTT. Make it a sequel after the next quarter"s poker game got boring. Even then too many strangers. Just have Amy dance and be fondled a little and give a couple of hand jobs. Then the original players are at boiling point when everyone returns to Ron's and a full blown orgy, everyone with everyone develops. Also the casual mention of anal at the end seemed like you could not be bothered any more. Finally, I think better if Tim had been the only one to miss out. Mark should have got some and had the biggest cock. Difficult to edit your own work: I wished to offer to help in future - because I do like your story and writing - but when I tried to PM a couple of messages came up I did not follow. I have been a member for some time and have posted threads and PMd. Robbie. |
| 2019-05-12 11:14:51 |
Betting the wives.
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Meant Tim should have been the only one to mid out with Amy. |
| 2019-07-10 12:11:24 |
My Girlfriend and I Have Sex in Front of Her Sister_(2)
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Very good story - more stories about these three please. Robbie. |
| 2019-07-10 12:16:46 |
Exhibitionist Sister - Chapter 9
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Brilliant! A great series of chapters about these three(/four) characters. Please do not stop now. More chapters continuing the story of these characters soon please. Robbie. |
| 2019-07-10 12:34:26 |
A Boy and His dungeon
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Wow. There are many more. I'll try them tomorrow. Robbie. |