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Comments from RandomRobbie
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-22 07:29:29 | Snowbound - the beginning | Excellent story Thank you. Robbie. |
| 2020-01-23 05:59:14 | Robert's Sexual Awakening Ch. 01 | Tremendous!!! I would not change anything and I can rarely say that. Bearing in mind length you did amazingly to keep the proof reading errors to less than a handful. I am looking forward to Chapter 2. Robert. |
| 2020-01-23 06:01:14 | Robert's Sexual Awakening Ch. 01 | Tremendous!!! I would not change anything and I can rarely say that. Bearing in mind length you did amazingly to keep the proof reading errors to less than a handful. I am looking forward to Chapter 2. Robert. |
| 2020-03-03 04:21:25 | Young Hypnotist- Jesse Day 1 | Hi Shorterm, Great idea but you would benefit from more proof reading to eradicate typographical and other simple mistakes. Somewhat surprising Jesse has not cleaned the floor?!? I guess Anna imprinted him with the idea to continue gaming despite Anna wandering around downstairs half naked - no normal boy would be able to follow that command - Anna must have very strong control over Jesse. RR. |
| 2020-03-21 08:17:23 | A Night Out Pt. 1 | Promising. Enjoyable but a little short. Proof read, or have someone else help with that, to eliminate silly errors such as tense changes. Add more de***********ive detail and slow down the pace: you have the makings. Robbie. |