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Comments from RandomRobbie
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2020-03-26 15:55:07 | Scottish Student gets her Start | Hi, I enjoyed your story. Thank you. It came across as true, well done. Lovely pacing in the build-up but perhaps accelerated too much so the later part was a touch too fast. If you added a little more de***********ive detail into it that would automatically slow the pace and be perfect. I am very much looking forward to reading more. Robert. |
| 2020-03-26 15:58:25 | Scottish Student gets her Start | .....de***********ive.....? Perhaps I used two words when one would suffice: ‘de***********ion’. |
| 2020-03-26 15:59:58 | Scottish Student gets her Start | Verb ‘ describe’. Tried adjective and then noun but for some reason ...... ? R. |
| 2020-04-13 07:36:15 | Pure Strip Poker | Strip poker, or other ‘betting game’ stories are my favourites, along with spanking stories. Betting game stories involving spanking as well as stripping are immense - but difficult to track down (any helpful suggestions). Some editing issues but bearing in mind how difficult it is to write a betting game story that holds up you should be cut some slack. Thank you, I am looking forward to reading the next story in this series in turn over the next few consecutive days. Your story take me back to that naive, innocent, exploratory, curious wonderment of youth:. Robert. |
| 2020-04-13 07:38:26 | Pure Strip Poker | Strip poker, or other ‘betting game’ stories are my favourites, along with spanking stories. Betting game stories involving spanking as well as stripping are immense - but difficult to track down (any helpful suggestions). Some editing issues but bearing in mind how difficult it is to write a betting game story that holds up you should be cut some slack. Thank you, I am looking forward to reading the next story in this series in turn over the next few consecutive days. Your story take me back to that naive, innocent, exploratory, curious wonderment of youth:. Robert. |