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Comments from wordytom
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2008-09-17 22:42:06 | Your story is fair at best. For onbe thing the religious crap does not work the way you have presented it. It is distracting to the story as a whole. You stated this is the best you have ever written. This means either you forgot a cardinal of writing - The reader cannot know what you mean, only what you tell in the story. Or, you are not as good as you believe you are. I think you have the makings of a good writer. | |
| 2008-09-19 17:12:25 | I'm old fashioned, I prefer consent and cooperation. | |
| 2008-09-21 20:53:15 | Drinking With My Sister | I gave it a negative rating because you do not know what you are writing about. You have a good imagination, but you need more to write a good story. You have a big ego that will prevent you from developing a big talent unless you tame it. I am hard on you here because I feel you might become a proficient writere is you first learn to write. You have promise. |
| 2008-09-28 11:23:53 | I Love Dogs_(0) | It made me wish I was a dog! |
| 2008-10-04 15:50:37 | ~Papas | I reluctantly gave you a positive rating for imagination. I suggest you learn more about the human body before you try to write about it. However, keep writing. that is the only way I know to improve. |