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Comments from wordytom
| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2008-10-08 15:00:03 | Barbara M. | Very well paced and erotic |
| 2008-10-10 19:04:25 | Trail Lodge Awakening Pt2. | Nice idea poorly done. First put spaces between your paragraphs. 2. Spell check. 3. Learn about how to make a narrative flow. You are worth the time I took to grouse at you. I believe you might improve. The rest are not worth the time to write "it stinks." |
| 2008-10-10 19:21:23 | Marnies Clan Pt 2 | Cute story, but the writing is as artificial and pretentious as a politician at a church service. Thank you for separating the paragraphs. It was at least readable |
| 2008-10-10 19:33:25 | I gave the good story a negative rating because you need to tell a better story. A shopping list of movements is not good story telling. You can do better, so please do better. Wordytom |
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| 2008-10-15 19:30:26 | About time | I thought it a nice little story |