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Comments from wordytom
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2008-11-09 19:56:11 | Very realistic and well told | |
| 2008-11-09 20:13:02 | Ali Baba was more realistic | |
| 2009-02-11 17:17:09 | My Son's Girlfriend - The Final Part | I suggest you spend more time developing the back story. It is still nice as it is, though. |
| 2009-05-20 21:17:08 | Instead of trying for clever, perhaps you shopuld just write the story as a narrative. |