| 2010-05-20 02:03:16 |
What's love without stupidity
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Why the YOUNG tag? Stating that they met in high school doesn't count. |
| 2010-05-20 03:49:18 |
My Baby Sister : Prologue
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'Nuff said about the spelling errors. Great read otherwise. Dunno why you thought this wasn't hot enough to wank to - it worked for me. But then, I'm a sucker for romantic young bro/sis stories. Off to part 2, then. |
| 2010-05-22 01:07:56 |
Young Fun #2
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Doubling the ages would have made the elder girl 26, and would not have worked as well. Still, the boy could've been a few years older. Other than that, not bad. Great descriptions and scene. |
| 2010-05-24 00:07:50 |
My Life 03 - What my little sister was up to...
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Very nice and well written. Could use a blank line between paragraphs, though. 8/10. |
| 2010-05-24 02:12:00 |
Christmas at the burrow
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Great story with wonderful character development - but a bit lacking in the sex department. Plus, the perspective shfting made me dizzy. |