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Comments from subkittehslut
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2009-11-12 07:46:07 | Seducing Silvio | Hm... seems to be formatting issues... oh well. It looked to be in normal paragraphs when I posted it. >=/ |
| 2009-11-13 12:03:33 | Fat Bastards Rapes My Arse – story 4 | I don't find this story all that unbelievable... I was taken advantage of in these types of ways when I was her age. To the author: I really like the stories, but a bit more detail would make them more stimulating... you named this segment after the anal rape, but then kinda glossed over it; it was kinda disappointing. The gangrape scene was hot though =) |
| 2009-12-03 12:03:27 | For His Deeds | I loved it... I do agree with the other girl that more detail of the oral would've been hotter. The fact that he fucked her to the beat of the music made up for it though; I have a thing for that. Fast, angry music for fast, angry sex ;D |
| 2010-11-23 13:35:50 | Taking Mary | Not bad; short, sweet, and pretty hot. You need to watch your continuity though; you had him tie her down hand and foot, and then in the middle of the action flip her over with no mention of releasing her(or the excruciating pain of having both shoulder and hips dislocated)... it's not a huge deal, just something to watch out for. |
| 2010-11-29 11:36:02 | Taking Mary | Sorry, I missed that bit; I saw as my comment was going through that you did indeed untie her, and it was too late to stop it. I apologize =) |