| 2009-09-14 09:11:56 |
Punishing Rachel, Part One
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I want to apologize to anyone who chose this expecting alien action; that was an accident, and by the time I saw it, it was too late to change it. I should probably have waited until later in the story to add Stockholm Syndrome as well... but since I didn't, you can see where it's going. >=) I also realize I missed a couple of typos... I have to type these on my phone and have no spellcheck. Other than that, hope I get some good feedback. |
| 2009-09-14 12:11:10 |
Raping My Daughter
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How exactly was that a rape story? I'm disappointed... it was unrealistic, especially the dialog. The pictures he took were like... pointless... I dunno. It seems thrown together and not well thought out. Maybe the next part will be better. |
| 2009-09-14 12:21:28 |
Raping My Daughter 2
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First it's 12 in, then it's 8... which I personally think you should stick with if you plan to continue. Foot-long cocks are such an overused, bad cliche. Once again, it felt... really, really fake, mostly due to the dialog and reactions of the girls. I'm not saying he COULDN'T make her like it, it just wouldn't be that easy, it would take time... and the likelihood a girl would suggest bringing another girl who rivaled her looks to the bedroom with her father... where there must be even MORE of the insane female jealousy because of the fucked-up nature of the dual relationship... are slim to none. Methinks the author really just doesn't know much about how women's minds work. |
| 2009-09-13 21:47:15 |
When I was raped
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PEOPLE WHO READ STORIES LABELED 'RAPE' AND THEN TELL THE PEOPLE WHO WROTE THEM HOW SICK THEY ARE FOR WRITING IT AFTER THEY FINISH WANKING OFF ARE THE WORST SORT OF PATHTIC, HYPOCRITICAL TROLLS. PISS UP A ROPE. YOU DON'T EVEN HAVE THE BALLS TO LOG IN TO LEAVE YOUR COMMENTS. |
| 2009-09-13 21:57:06 |
Reading Allowed, Pt.1
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Lovely story... one bone to pick. The Sleeping Beauty trilogy was written under A.N. Roquelaure, and even though everyone knows that's Anne Rice, the books still bear the pen name. I own all three, and they are a big part of the reason I am who I am now. ;D |