| 2012-11-22 15:55:07 |
Without a Reason
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Since your story took place over an entire night, I would have thought a lot more detailed sex would have taken place. Not a bad story, it just needed to be longer with more detail. |
| 2012-11-22 23:58:49 |
Sweet Little Sister - Part 4
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I continue to look forward to the next chapter. Inspite of your less than perfect English, you are writing a great story. Please continue. |
| 2012-11-23 00:01:54 |
Teaching Her Girls How To Fuck(Part 1 The Mother)
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Perhaps in part 2 you can have the daughters get a little up close and personal ecucation. You have a great start to a hot story. |
| 2014-10-17 00:48:24 |
New House Guests - An Adult Story
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Nice story, but please consider proof reading. |
| 2012-12-13 01:10:47 |
Stepsister Seduction
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That was an excellent start to what promisses to be an extremely erotic story. I hope the next chapter is soon to come. Thanks for your efforts. |