| 2012-04-19 08:52:28 |
Catherine - My First Victim
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Fairly well written, but leaving all that DNA was stupid. |
| 2012-04-19 23:45:20 |
The School Spinster Takes A Chance
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Fantastic story! Yes, it was a bit long, but it held my attention from beginnng to end. I hope you keep writing stories such as this. |
| 2012-05-03 00:37:44 |
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A vesry good story. If I have any criticism, it would be to point out the need to proofread your stuff. Otherwise, you've done a real good job. |
| 2012-05-18 22:47:52 |
The babysitter returns part 2
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Another excellent story. I look forward to part three. |
| 2012-06-09 00:04:31 |
I'm sorry but I can't pay the rent this month.
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I think she needs to kick Jake's lazy ass out and keep Harold happy. Her ass could be a profitable asset for both of them. |