| 2011-06-03 15:57:30 |
The Hidden Cabin
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I found your story entertaining albeit too short. You cut if off much too soon. BTW, I know what fantasy means. Apparently too many others here don't. Hope to see part two soon. |
| 2011-07-18 04:08:09 |
Whatever You Want
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Good story, but it could have used more detail of the sex scene. Keep at it. |
| 2011-08-16 01:59:13 |
The Hitchhiker - teenage cumslut
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You Sir are a kindred spirit. The action you wrote about wasn't rape. After all, she agreed to your terms. |
| 2011-09-13 04:03:06 |
Mountain Angel
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You have written a wonderfully erotic story. Keep up the good work. |
| 2011-09-13 04:19:11 |
Her first time.
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Excellent work for your first effort at this type of writing. |