| 2014-09-23 00:32:42 |
Creating the Pack ch 1_(1)
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You have a nice beginning to your story. Before reading the next two parts, I would like to suggest you proof read your work, use spell check, and double line space between paragraphs. That will make your story much easier to read. Now I'm off to read your next chapter. |
| 2010-08-08 21:57:22 |
The Kidnapping of Baby
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I'm looking forward to the next chapter. This story looks like it can be a fun read. After a month of her treatment, Baby may have gotten bred and be with baby. |
| 2010-08-16 05:26:17 |
Crusade of Terror 1
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I loved it. I hope there is more to come. Perhaps you could have one of the rags watch as you fuck his bitch. Let the rags die together too. Fuck the rags and raglovers that berate your efforts. |
| 2010-08-18 05:26:26 |
Getting my revenge
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If you writer a follow-up, how about some details of the girls age and why she's so submissive. It would be interesting to see the husband go to jail for marrying an underaged girl leaving her with all his money and property. Just an idea. |
| 2010-08-24 23:00:55 |
Debt Collector Pt 4
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This has been an excellent series thus far. I look forward to the continued tale of Jill, Mandy, the brother, and moste importantly, the debtor father's reaction. The final resolution should be great. |