| 2010-12-31 05:28:19 |
Jack and Jill - A Naughty Nursery Rhyme
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I loved your take on this old story. Thanks and keep up your excellent work. |
| 2011-01-01 17:00:52 |
Breaking and Entering & Two Sisters Home Alone
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I liked it in spite of a few errors. It was sometimes hard to follow who was doing what to whom. Also the girls went from being told to strip to having their tits sucked and pussies fingered. I agree with the need for more detail. You seem to have the talent for writing porn. I am sure you will improve with practice. |
| 2011-01-07 11:04:10 |
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You have written a good story that needs to be finished. |
| 2011-02-18 03:59:50 |
Ugly duckling
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I loved your story. It should remind all of us that even those less beautiful and worthy of tenderness and love. Well done. |
| 2014-08-17 01:11:37 |
Trail of tears Part_2
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Another excellent chapter. I hope this story continues for several more additions. |