| 2011-04-17 06:58:08 |
I Raped my mom_(0)
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Personal choice aside, a person has to be a sick deviant to even THINK this shit up. Get some help. |
| 2011-04-17 17:33:02 |
Birthday sex
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Shaun, I TRIED to like this story but : No paragraphs, shocking spelling and an almost babyish use of the English language made it impossible. If you read some of the stories and look at the format of the best, you will see what I mean. |
| 2011-04-17 17:50:34 |
my redhead sister
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Gave a positive for the story and paragraphing, then realized I couldn't also give a negative for the lousy grammar and spelling. Ohh well, still loved the story Indabutt. One day you'll get it right and become a really good writer. |
| 2011-04-17 17:54:46 |
my redhead sister...part 2!
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Hey Indie, BIG improvement in this story over the first. Still unaware of where to use capital letters (like the beginning of sentences) but, a lot better. 7/10 |
| 2011-04-17 19:17:07 |
Secret Cameras in the House
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Very good story. Follow up needed. Mummy needs 9 inches. |