| 2011-04-18 23:39:02 |
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Really enjoyed that. Good story, well written. Looking forward to the next. . . . . |
| 2011-04-18 23:46:24 |
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Sniff, sniff Good writing, good story |
| 2011-04-18 23:51:53 |
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Not that I particularly care for bondage or rape stories, this is a bloody good start, but as a story it is only a cameo and needs a Part II to make it complete. |
| 2011-04-18 23:58:43 |
Nothing Compares
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You're a good emotion inspiring writer but this just left me feeling down in the dumps. If that was your aim, you succeeded. |
| 2011-04-18 23:59:13 |
Nothing Compares
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You're a good emotion inspiring writer but this just left me feeling down in the dumps. If that was your aim, you succeeded. |