| 2011-04-23 02:35:58 |
Full Circle - Chapter Five
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Fix'm you dipshit. You know what this story is like. Stop and I'll get my wife to hunt you down and HURT you. . . .and she could do it. The last person she got pissed with was a certain George Armstrong Custer . . .and you know what happened to him. Just get a couple more parts up so I can read 'em. |
| 2011-04-23 05:03:53 |
Innocence Lost_(1)
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Great first part. Let's see where it goes b. . . . |
| 2011-04-23 05:30:24 |
Raising Little Tabby Jack Part Four
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One of my favorite stories written by a master story teller. 9/10 |
| 2011-04-23 07:47:08 |
pleasurable stranger
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Thank you, Great start but take heed of the three previous comments esp Fix'm. He knows. Story needs "fleshing out" and this is a sex story site so more sex and character development needed. At this stage I give positive vote and 6.5/10 |
| 2011-04-23 08:06:42 |
Seducing Our Sons
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Agree with Fix'm, blueheatt. . .You're a bloody pervert . . .just like us. Bloody good start and I WANT to see more. Three horny pussey's and two permanently hard cocks. You SHOULD be able to do something with that. 8/10 and positive vote. |