| 2011-04-29 21:22:45 |
Melody at my cottage
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Red, really good little vignette. I enjoyed it. Three faults : Melody with a capital M - it's her name ; bury your head in her hair not berry - that's a fruit ; sundae is the ice cream - Sunday is a day of the week. Couple of others but . . . . .I repeat, LOVED the story, it's just that little errors break concentration. 8/10 and + vote |
| 2011-04-30 05:33:36 |
20 questions
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I think Sexykitty and Msr. Shakespeare summed it up fairly well, except because unique is a superlative it can't be very unique. (Unique means one of a kind, and something can't be very one of a kind). However I digress, one of the most enjoyable dissertations I have had the privilege of perusing. Well done and thank you for sharing. . . . 9.5/10 |
| 2011-04-30 05:38:20 |
New Discoveries
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Poor mommy doesn't get to ride the sugar stick . . .Boo Hoo. Be only half gay and let her have the slippery sausage up her poop shute. |
| 2011-04-30 05:40:02 |
New Discoveries
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Poor mommy doesn't get to ride the sugar stick . . .Boo Hoo. Be only half gay and let her have the slippery sausage up her poop shute. PS for a first attempt this was a very interesting and erotic story. Good show Young man. |
| 2011-05-01 06:45:39 |
SAGA FROM LOVING MOM TO BECOME WIFE_(0)
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First sentence of this story says it all. I don't know how to start telling my story. English is OBVIOUSLY your second language and it shows. Didn't bother reading much further to have it confirmed.... |