| 2011-04-24 01:51:25 |
Catherine and her Daddy (repost so it can be read)
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Agree with Fix'm. Pretty standard in plot but beautifully written and spaced. Thank you 8/10 |
| 2011-04-24 02:04:28 |
Such Good Friends
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Determined little pussey wasn't she?? Good story, well written and enjoyed it. No real character build up but definitely worth reading. 7/10 |
| 2011-04-24 02:17:54 |
Apartment Complex Susan Pt. 2
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Like most of your stories, good storyline and character development but as a hint for an otherwise worthy writer, solid blocks of text are hard to read and frustrate avid readers. Separate paragraphs to allow a breath now and then would be helpful. 7/10 |
| 2011-04-24 02:26:32 |
Maryann's Birthday Present
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Now, THIS was better than the Tenant Susan story, because of the spacing. Couple that with your talent and I have to confess, "Not too shabby at all." Really enjoyed this one a lot. Thank you. 8/10 and positive vote. |
| 2011-04-25 01:53:52 |
The Hitch-Hiker, Part 2
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First two parts are bloody great. Can't wait for Part Three and I hope they do stay together. Well Done. 8/10 |