| 2011-04-18 18:47:41 |
Maryanne’s Story – Secret Kisses
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Thank bp123. Loved the story and although I'm a 60 year old male (and happily married for well over 30 years) I think I'm also a closet lesbian (I'd love to join their little game - LOL) Well written and spaced, clear and well presented. Positive vote and 8/10 |
| 2011-04-18 19:02:23 |
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Hey PEOPLE!! Stop criticising wantsomefun. He's really a nice person born with a defect called typus fuckuppus which means his brain isn't connected to his fingers. Sure he's a defective, but he's a nice defective and he can only hurt you if you let him. Feel sorry for him, because he's such a sorry little fuckwit. |
| 2011-04-18 21:48:52 |
A Different Kind of Love
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NEARLY as good as your 'Holly' story but not quite so 9.9/10. Loved it. You are 'Da Man' |
| 2011-04-18 22:55:14 |
I guess I really DID need a vacation!
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Fuck it wsf, can you even write a BAD story. You have the knack to bring humanity to your characters before they get bonked silly. . . and the bonking is pretty good too |
| 2011-04-18 23:03:08 |
Shortcut to rape
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Stories are easier to read if they are broken down into paragraphs. This could be a good story, but I gave up on a solid block of text. |