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Comments from Ghostrider939
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-11-15 05:58:12 | You WILL be my princess!_(0) | Loverbr 2012-11-13 15:08:58 *before *Ghostrider939 was not only false about him but very rude and uncalled for. I'm sure you can see by the tears in my eyes that I really could give a shit about what you think of me. As I first mentioned I could see some merit in your story - and then plainly commented on what the errors were. If knucklehead wants to call me a Grammar Nazi then I am quite prepared to retaliate. I am aware that this is just a porn site, BUT it IS a porn site for 'Writers of Porn' with emphasis on writers, and if you want to put up a crappy presentation because you wrote it on a crappy tablet or cellphone, expect some one to say 'Good Story-Shit layout.' If you can't write right - Don't write! |
| 2012-11-16 14:18:34 | Sinturian, Your stories are really good from my perspective and I have saved the best. I nearly wrote this one off as crap because you ARE a good writer and you do know what PARAGRAPHS and APOSTROPHES are. However, I persevered, and I am glad I did. POSITIVE VOTE for the beginning to what may be a great story | |
| 2012-11-20 22:41:15 | Fuck Pals | Saw no paragraphs. . . . .Bye bye |
| 2012-11-20 22:56:19 | Fuck Pals Chapter 1 | Same applies the other way PF. If you're going to insult our intelligence by posting a poorly written story and then try to blackmail the readers into voting positive - you've got a LOT to learn about this site. Suggest : Double spacing between paragraphs, Joe is a name therefore capital letter, the personal pronoun 'I' is always a capital. Taking that one step further 'I'll' is an abbreviation of 'I will' so 'I' is capital and apostrophe indicates letters missing. You spelt 'tight' correctly and then spelt 'mite' wrong. The word is 'might'. 'Semen' comes from a dick 'seamen' go to sea. Simple things mostly that using the spell checker would correct |
| 2012-11-23 19:14:29 | Anonymous 00:16:01 Are you as totally mindless as your comments or did you have to really try to be that stupid. At the top of the page it says 'Fantasy' ie doesn't have to be realistic. If you are so desperate for believable, go to an encyclopaedia website. |