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Comments from Ghostrider939
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-10-18 18:33:48 | My Mom in Painful Sex_(0) | See what happens when you don't do things right or proofread. You end up with shit like this. No paragraphs (a solid block of text just makes people think 'Fuck it' and move on.) She drank 125 litres of water - 30 GALLONS - Fuck off Noddy - She'd be dead at about five litres. And the story's crap. Puerile and senseless. Neg Vote |
| 2012-10-19 03:00:47 | Ami Grows Up_(0) | Really wanted to tell you what a great writer you are, greeneyes, but got stuck on this feeling that a writer who is too lazy to properly format a story (ie USE FUCKIN' PARAGRAPHS) doesn't really want me to read it, so I stopped there. Could be a GREAT story - I'm just not interested in getting a headache trying to read it. |
| 2012-10-19 03:03:41 | Apartment Hunting_(0) | No paragraphs - no read - Neg Vote |
| 2012-10-19 03:10:55 | Introdoucing The Breeding Bench | waiste, mummer, catious, convae, Enough said. Shit spelling. My favourite say 'If you can't write right - Don't write' You also have a domination fetish which sickens me. |
| 2012-10-20 22:51:36 | Chuck's Chicago Assignment III | Sorry 1stprize, Last poster was me. . . .I don't like anonymous posts and this stupid fucking system logs me out far too regularly. Still want to see more . . . |