| 2012-10-12 22:51:25 |
Robbie & Eve - I'm right here if you want me
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One of the most beautiful and well written stories I have had the pleasure to read. Well Done!! I have quite a few Japanese and Chinese friends and can understand the attraction to their beauty and Eurasian females are some of the most beautiful women on Earth. Add in the temperament and perfection is only a stone's throw away. POSITIVE VOTE |
| 2012-10-15 07:37:12 |
Obsessed with Mother's body.
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Should have stopped reading when I realised you couldn't even spell your own nom de plume ( since there is no such thing as a writter I presume you meant Pervwriter) BUT I continued, and realised you were too stupid to know what paragraphs were (they taught you about those in school) and I still don't know what a 'tounge' is. I spell it tongue. Story wasn't bad though, so no neg vote and no pos vote. |
| 2012-10-15 07:48:27 |
Diary of a Mother Fucker Part 1
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'She was just lying there . . . .' Highly unlikely a 52 year old gets pregnant. Why make her so old - she could have been 36-40. No paragraphs, rubbed has TWO 'B's, spooned has TWO 'O's, strangely has an 'e' in it. etc etc |
| 2012-10-16 20:57:04 |
The Love Story of Halie and Caleb
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Probably one of the best 'romantic' stories I have had the privilege of reading, though I question it being on a predominantly sex oriented site. Technically faulty, - some spelling errors - wrong word rather than wrong spelling, and not spaced out enough. (Paragraphs too large and therefore possible to lose interest/concentration) Still good enough to get my Positive Vote. |
| 2012-10-16 21:34:36 |
Robbie & Eve - I’m right here if you want me
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Some people worry about the tiniest things - like pumping fuel, AND I see the wannabee fucked are still advertising where they're not wanted . . . . .BUT Robbie and Eve - this story was brilliant. Hope you two have a long and happy life together. My wife (Evelyn) and I have been together 35 years and it's still fantastic, honeymoon style love - just with a lot less bumping bellies - old age etc. |