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Comments from Ghostrider939
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-09-24 18:23:06 | Cassie_(2) | Of Course this IS an English test, you daft person. IF you want to be considered a writer, then you do your best to write well. Having said that, I loved the story, you spaced it well, only made a few minor mistakes and came up with a very enjoyable end product. Congratulations and POSITIVE vote. Expect to see more from you. |
| 2012-09-25 22:11:33 | Mommy knows best part 3 | Great imagination, Great story - SHIT writer. Layout, spacing, punctuation etc etc. Didn't make up my mind whether to give +ve vote for story or -ve vote for shit presentation, so I didn't do either. |
| 2012-09-27 00:31:49 | Enjoyed the story Dizz, but some really bizarre spelling mistakes that made me laugh, and broke my concentration. However my wife thinks I'm a sour old bastard and need to laugh more anyway. Positive Vote | |
| 2012-09-27 19:48:39 | A Mother and Her Love of Her Son; Pt 1 | Agree with other reader. Really HOT story spoiled by lack of punctuation. With proper quotation marks, this would be one of the hottest stories here. Great work and would love to see a Part Two. ( with Kenzie and punctuation) |
| 2012-09-30 21:21:41 | Step-daughter, Mendy's and my First time | Main problem, Hank, is HUGE sentences. Break down the sentences into manageable chunks. Very long diatribes bore most people shitless, and bored people can be less than complimentary in their assessments of your writing style. If it's only a fantasy story, make yourself taller, change the daughter's name to Mindy or Wendy, explain what is wrong with your son (ie Bi-polar or ??) Not a BAD story - just needs some improvement. |