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Comments from Happy Rabbit
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2011-06-25 20:54:22 | My Sweet First Wife | Ghostrider939: Thank you for your input and I will let you know now that, I really like your Work. Thank you again for the input. The 6.1 Rating might say it all if I really cared, which I don't, I have not in a long time been read by 1700 plus people. I have just reread this work (it is in my favs). I did not use Spell Check on the Intro and it shows, I can fix that. The body has been Spell Checked more then once and that part is not so bad. What I am and this is how my mind works, is all over the place, and into Subplots and Sub Stories. I AM HARD TO FOLLOW. I can only fix some of that. To me life is kind of a stage and we are players on that Stage. I will try not to ramble so much in the future. It like Robin Williams, or Drew Carry when they go into Improv. Your going one direction and a word or idea crosses you mind and you going some place else. Its like farting and then thinking you need to put Gas in the Car. I use Caps because I like to. Tham |
| 2011-06-25 21:03:48 | My Sweet First Wife | I liked My Story, I will admit it is hard to follow. Thats legal, and Non Fatting by the way. Moral is a question of Opnion. Have you Read The World According To Garp thats kind of like me. Also an Enviromental Book, Called "Sick Puppy" Very much like me in Style. Like i said 1st Story in a long time should get better. Wait till some of the people in my storys start speaking Pidge. |
| 2011-06-25 21:08:04 | Nadia the Nymphomaniac - The Beginning | That wa a good Story. I ran inot it while checking on someone who gave me a nagative rating in my story. Just great work really enjoyed it. |
| 2011-06-26 17:02:48 | Father's Day Roast | This Story as sick as it is, is still extremely creative. Interesting and well written. She may have been sick enough to write it but we where sick enough to read it. If there is and foul its on us, not her. |
| 2011-06-27 18:58:13 | Penny, May I Rescue you from Hell? | As a Vietnam Vet that story is outstanding. You did a great job. I would have skiped it but your name was on the by line and I always read your work. Loved the Story it in my Favs. |