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Comments from animal99
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2013-04-14 22:56:37 | Deep Sleeper Ch. 02 | good story... would like to see her further her playtime explorations :) |
| 2013-04-15 12:47:12 | Milk of Desire, Book II : Chapter 6 : Mom's home! | Wow... excellent Series. I came across one then read another..before I knew it I'd read them all at one session! All your story "chapters" read SO smoothly, I didn't even notice any misspellings or grammar mistakes unlike other less polished writers on this site! Will there be more BOOKS and chapters? With your style of writing and imagination, I can't believe I'll tire of reading these stories any time soon - and THAT's a BIG compliment :) |
| 2013-04-17 11:39:34 | Naked daughter | This was an Excellent and well written story.... and yet, it got me hot :) I hope to run into more of your stories! |
| 2013-04-18 23:46:22 | excellent story! can't wait to read part (chapter?) 2! | |
| 2013-04-19 15:19:01 | Sister and Me_(1) | This story could be So much better if you fixed as few items.... take your time with jumping from one event to another... you write as if you're in a big hurry to get to the end. Delete this version... it doesn't show your talent in a good way. Rewrite this story, and take into account what i and others have pointed out. When you repost, add "(Editted)" or "(Corrected)†to the end of the subject and titles of this new story. |