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Comments from animal99
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2013-04-11 12:38:26 | My Adopted Daughter 4 | excellent story... almost feels true-to-life. I agree with Merc098, for your next chapter he should give her as lecture..after he throws his friends out. and to anonymous....the girl was not made into a whore.... she was called that by one of his friends. Dad should straighten her out and warn her about her behavior.... that it could lead her to a bad life. |
| 2013-04-11 13:04:24 | Who Am I? part 1 | really good story and so truly believable.... to those peole yelling spell checker- the mistakes in spellingvwhere as legitimate words replaces a wrongly sdpelled word is called as legal mispelling. Sometimes the user chooses the wrong word when presented with options and other times it's the spell-checker software that chooses for you. Microsoft Word used to maske those legal mispelling mistakes all by itself. Author- they're right in that you need to prtoofread your stories. |
| 2013-04-11 13:19:02 | Who Am I? part 1 | really good story and so truly believable.... to those peole yelling spell checker- the mistakes in spellingvwhere as legitimate words replaces a wrongly sdpelled word is called as legal mispelling. Sometimes the user chooses the wrong word when presented with options and other times it's the spell-checker software that chooses for you. Microsoft Word used to maske those legal mispelling mistakes all by itself. Author- they're right in that you need to prtoofread your stories. |
| 2013-04-13 16:58:56 | Little Sister_(1) | really good story :) |
| 2013-04-13 17:24:13 | Deep Sleeper Ch. 01 | this was so good you had me enjoying it along with your character, Rachel. can't wait to read the rest of the series. |