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Comments from animal99
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2013-04-10 09:42:02 | Dear uncle john | good story but Needs proofreading - and you need to learn how to punctuate! Bad punctuation really makes reading your stories difficult! (I already mentioned this before but it's worth mentioning again!) |
| 2013-04-10 09:42:38 | the zargons_(0) | you should delete this story since it is blank! |
| 2013-04-10 09:44:38 | the zargons 2 | Wow.. you REALLY need to get this proofread... and fix your punctuation and Grammar! The story has some good parts but it doesn't read well because of those mistakes I pointed out. Please FIX! |
| 2013-04-10 10:13:15 | Camping with Mom_(1) | Hot story! Any plans for future chapters? :) |
| 2013-04-10 10:17:26 | Cozumel | I really enjoyed this.. although I needed more... something - I don't know what. But I would really enjoy reading future chapters to this story. |