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Comments from luvsalik
| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2015-07-24 20:11:41 | On the Ocean | Just wanted to give my reeeally unbiased review this work, (hee,hee,hee) I'm not in to wonen, but I enjoyed the story, the erotic action was hot, I preferlonger , but this is a well written, easy to read, spicy number. Maybe Holly will be an integral third to the marriage. COLD ZERO I have already reviewed this for the CAW , so my review is the same. I felt it was part of a much larger story, maybe you will do the full story ? WE DONT HAVE MUCH TIME. I love pre/post apocalyptic literature,. The way societal rules , laws breakdown at the world's end. This is so my bag. It was well written ,easy to read and no typos.There is one fault, the couple should have had lots more sexual encounters , but thats because I can't get enough of you, I mean the character. This is a romantic, erotic vignette that , gave me a warm and fuzzy feeling in more than one place ! Thank you for taking the time and writingand dedicating to me . I love it and you hubby! Luvsalik |
| 2015-07-19 22:40:24 | Rose 2: The Road Back | I wasn't going to leave a review but I just had to. I enjoyed the first installment of this series , and I thoroughly enjoyed it. This part however was a serious cut above. Your writing from the first one improved markedly for me. As I. said the first one was really good but this one was fab, your story content was vetter and the descriptions of the sexual encounters was arousing and very erotic,. I was extremely aroused and horny reading this , much more than the first. I really enjoy incest stories , I've never been attracted to my family members but the thought is highly arousing, possibly its the added effect of already loving the person, or the intimacy already established along with the forbidden nature of the relationship. I think you should continue writing if you improve so much from story to story , as seen with this two episodes , then who knows where you will go, very far I think. Thanks a lot for your hard work and time. More please. Luvsalik xx. |
| 2015-07-20 00:05:36 | Moving On_(1) | I enjoyed the story. It was a little out there, and a little like a space odessy. The writing from both was extremely accomplished and highly descriptive. The entity and the erotic activities description was detailed and imaginative. Saying that I felt the story was a little disjointed, it started one way then went off at a tangent, and at times I felt like events , people and activities seemed to appear and disappear with no lead in to and out of them. Having said that it was still a good read , and the quality of the writing was excellent. Thanks for the time and effort. Luvsalik. |
| 2015-12-19 19:36:55 | Civil_(1) | Mr X, I loved this, very civilised indeed :) Not being a U. S. Citizen, I dont know a great deal about Mr Lincoln, just I suppose the major things everyone knows , the important things he's famous and stood for. This probably wasn't a factual story (I wouldnt really know ;p ) but it was a story I enjoyed a lot . You wrote very well in the first person narrative, it suited you and the story, I loved the fairness and his total lack of bias, you portrayed him well and he seemed like a lovely bloke, one I'd be friends with , he reminds me in his nature of someone I love . I didnt notice any mistakes , I didn't feel it lacked anything, it was a very well written story, with a great moral, I was pleasantly surprised at the sexual content of this non-erotic story. A very classy tale, worthy of a CAW entry, thanks for this interesting read, more please . Luvs xx |
| 2016-03-01 17:33:37 | Jessica_(6) | Quite a good story, not long enough for me , a little more background and a little more build up in the anticipation to there first encounter would add the little something its lacking for me. But your descriptions were great and it definitely got me hot . Thanks for the effort . Luvs xx |